Wednesday, November 5, 2014

An On-the -Spot Poem. Please enjoy and please send your prayers to this teacher if you know who she is.

Sunglasses to mask the Sorrow

My teacher's father died. 
Last week she was absent,
probably attending his funeral.
I still can barely imagine that seen
without her full of energy and light.
Although when I saw her yesterday
she was all but that.
Her eyes were rimmed red,
and they were bloodshot.
I was afraid, so I tried to act normal.
Today when I saw her she was better.
Her eyes were still rimmed red,
but she had more cheer and spirit.
My mom and I came in to see her
and talk about my grades.
When we were about to leave,
my mom hugged my teacher,
and she said, "Thanks. I need it."
As we turned to say goodbye,
I noticed that my mom 
quickly wiped a tear out of her eye
and put on her sunglasses 
to mask her sorrow.
I remembered then that
my mother, too, had lost her father
at a young age.
I thought, she must know what it feels like.
My mom and I didn't talk the car ride back,
but now I know what she was thinking about.

1 comment:

  1. I really like this a lot Aimee! You wrote about an experience that happened to you just an hour ago and you made into a lovely poem. It felt very real. Your captured the simple connection your mom and your teacher had based on just a couple details. You were able to say so much and encompass a lot of emotion, with little words. Great Job!!! I look forward to reading your blog more.
    Meg :)

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