My teacher's father died.
Last week she was absent,
probably attending his funeral.
I still can barely imagine that seen
without her full of energy and light.
Although when I saw her yesterday
she was all but that.
Her eyes were rimmed red,
and they were bloodshot.
I was afraid, so I tried to act normal.
Today when I saw her she was better.
Her eyes were still rimmed red,
but she had more cheer and spirit.
My mom and I came in to see her
and talk about my grades.
When we were about to leave,
my mom hugged my teacher,
and she said, "Thanks. I need it."
As we turned to say goodbye,
I noticed that my mom
quickly wiped a tear out of her eye
and put on her sunglasses
to mask her sorrow.
I remembered then that
my mother, too, had lost her father
at a young age.
I thought, she must know what it feels like.
My mom and I didn't talk the car ride back,
but now I know what she was thinking about.
I really like this a lot Aimee! You wrote about an experience that happened to you just an hour ago and you made into a lovely poem. It felt very real. Your captured the simple connection your mom and your teacher had based on just a couple details. You were able to say so much and encompass a lot of emotion, with little words. Great Job!!! I look forward to reading your blog more.
ReplyDeleteMeg :)